" Mommy Why? "
Today I couldn't take the way this baby, My baby? was getting to my head. I went to a therapist and they told me to write everything the baby was saying and give it to him tommorow.
He handed me a note pad and a pencil to use and told me good day. That night when I got home, Karen's house, I took a shower and as soon as I got out I noticed that I was bleeding. "Why is this? Why am I bleeding?" I cried out. I went into the room Karen let me sleep in and on the wall was words written in red letters, Mommy Why?. I smelt the words and whiped some on my fingers, and yes, it was blood on the wall. I ran to get Karen and as soon as we returned to the room the letters were gone.
I took the note pad went into a corner and started writing. I wrote on the aper everything the baby was saying to me. When I went to the therapist the next day I gave him my paper and he was really suprised. I was the only patient of his that has/had this specific problem. I did not only write about what the baby was saying to me, I wrote about how I tried to kill myself and what happend that same night. He told me that he could not help me with this problem. He told me that he was going to send me to rehab and I begged him not to send me there. He told me nothing would happend and that they would put me in a nice quiet dorm/room and I have nothing to worry about. I believed him and went along with it. That night he took me there and something happend. He took me to his house. He asked me to do the same thing and I told him that I wouldnt because of what happend to andrew and he begged me. I did it. It was way better. My baby got to me again and said to me " What about Daddy mommy and I felt like Ohh Sh**. I loved my therapist. I made out with him for a while and he told me I was too young. I told him no and that I loved him too much and that age is just another number. He did'nt send me to rehab and instead of that he helped me by treating me to good help :) .Until he found me one night trying to commit suicide and he helped me and I told him that she's back. He put her in rehab the next night and that night someone sneaked into her dorm and almost raped her. She was so scared. She called he "lover" /therapist and he didn't believe her. The people in the rehab center put her in a stray jacket and in a cushoned room. Simone was so scared. That night Simone had a panic attack and they had to put numb needle in her nd cuff her up and put her to sleep. Back at home the therapist was looking at Simone's file and find out that she had an STD..........................
Wednesday, April 28, 2010
Friday, April 23, 2010
I got a new girlfriend, though I don't like girls.[a]
I haven't much money, but I buy her pearls.[a]
I'm always embarrassed, but I give her flowers,[b]
and talk on the phone every evening for hours.[b]
We go to the movies, and she gets to pick.[c]
She wants to hold hands, though it makes me feel sick.[c]
She likes when I smell good, so I take a bath.[d]
I do what she asks me, and she does my math.[d]
-- Kenn Nesbit
I haven't much money, but I buy her pearls.[a]
I'm always embarrassed, but I give her flowers,[b]
and talk on the phone every evening for hours.[b]
We go to the movies, and she gets to pick.[c]
She wants to hold hands, though it makes me feel sick.[c]
She likes when I smell good, so I take a bath.[d]
I do what she asks me, and she does my math.[d]
-- Kenn Nesbit
Friday, April 16, 2010
a lot of losses one HUGE gain
hi, my name is lissa and i found out i was pregnant when i was 16. the father was a guy i knew for a long time. i was 1 month pregnant when i told him. the first thing he said was " what??" then he went on to say that it is partly his fault i am pregnant and he will definately be in his babys life. we stayed together. the next step was telling my parents. my mom was very upset because she was a teen mom she kicked me out for 1 week then she said " i know how it is, so i will help you" she was a teen mom aswell. she had me when she was 19. my dad was very dissapointed. his little girl was PREGNANT!! i cried for about a month, because i made my parents dissapointed after all they did for me. he just said we all make mistake, so if you think your old enough to have sex, your old enough to take are of the baby. he said hell help me though. 5 months later i found out i was having a boy. people at school were definately talking!! i never really cared what people said. then my due date came and passed. i actually had the baby 1 week passed my due date MARCH 27 2009. his name was XAVIER. my bubba, lol. i love my son so much. when he was 3 months his father told me he cant be with me anymore because he feels he doesnt feel the same way he did before. i cried for a whole week. the father of xavier is still coming by twice a week to see him. he is trying to help me finacially. i am now living in my own apartment. im doing fine. i am getting an education at a community college. i have my familys support. i always say i love the father of my son for giving me the best gift in the world,,, XAVIER.
lissa
Experience is a Hard Teacher
I got pregnant when I was 17 years old, I was so happy due to the fact that it was from my first love in high school. I had dreams of us being together forever, through thick or thin. But I was wrong! We broke up after our third child and after 10 years of being together. I struggled alot and had gotten evicted many times due to the fact that I didn't have a high school diploma. I was depressed all of the time, and I tried to commit suicide, because no one likes to see their child hungry, and I was just a kid myself or at least what was left of one. I was fortunate because my father caught me and called 911. After they pumped my stomach I was sent to the crazy house (NO REALLY). There I was counceled and they kept asking me why I was trying to do something so permanent for a situation so temporary. I told them over and over my reason,but they kept saying that it would get better. I am 30 years old, I have 5 kids and it is still hard for me. But I count on no one, I struggled through all of my 20's and I was in and out of abusive relationships starting with the one with my kids father. He is in prison and my kids are just fine. I am in college now typing this story. Because, I want other people now what I experienced in hopes that they will not make the same mistakes that I did. Never let anyone ruin your life. I mean if you are not ready to become a mother, never let anyone talk you into it. Because it is not fun being poor and uneducated. Its not fun watching your kids go to bed without eating or not having enough to eat, and its not fun when your kids want something and you are not able to get it. I am the only one that stuck around and struggled with my kids. I am the one they come to when they are happy and when they are not. I am a good mom but it was hard!
Vikki
single and aloneI am 19 and have just found out that I am pregnant. I am alone now because my boyfriend of 3 months has got back together with his ex who he also has a kid with but he doesnt want to know and has basically ignored me even though I have told him that I am pregnant and i think he will want me to have an abortion if he even acknowledges me and my baby. I am scared to tell my family because I am the responsible one and should not be doing this.
Vikki
Surpise at 16I fell pregnant in November of 2008. I wasn't late when i found out but my mother said she thought i was pregnant and to take a test. Mothers intuition she blamed it on. I took 4 tests and in astonishment i discovered i was indeed pregnant. I was 16 years old. (Just) I told my boyfriend who was quite calm about it and said 'it doesn't surprise me now lets tell your mum/" i told mum and she said ' lets take you to the dr then and get a blood test to make sure' 2 days later it was confirmed and i was approx 3 weeks pregnant giving me a due date of August 25 2009. By this point i was excited but i still had no education so i enrolled in TAFE to get a school certificate. My pregnancy progressed smoothly and by 7 months i looked as though i was carrying twins. I was huge. We tried to find out the sex of the baby but it had its legs crossed in the ultrasound so we were told we had to wait. My due date came and went and on August 29th 2009 i wasn't feeling myself. I kept getting cramps but they were very irregular coming every 2 hours. I dismissed them as labour pains until later that night when my boyfriend and brother went fishing. I stayed with mum and later had to call my boyfriend to get him to come home as i was quite scared and uncomfortable. I laboured all night and the pains only got intense around 5am (August 30th) I spent the whole night watching TV and walking around and timing contractions. At 5.30am we left to go to the hospital. The Dr told me i wasn't in labour and to go home and take panadol. I went home quite angry to be honest and tried choking down panadol until i said to mum, I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!' and after saying that my water broke all over the lounge room floor. My boyfriend whisked me up and put me in the car and mum rushed me back to hospital where they confirmed i was 6cm dialated and was progressing quite quickly. I was told to expect a baby within the next 24hrs. The next 5 hrs were a complete blur to me, the pain was intense but not unbearable. I pushed and pushed for almost an hour and after having an episiotomy (which didnt hurt) my little GIRL was born. She weighed 7.6lbs and 49cm long. She had blonde hair, blue eyes and a very loud scream! I looked up and both my mum and boyfriend were crying. 4 hours after giving birth i went home because the midwives were cruel to me i assume because of my age. Xanthie is 7 months old now and is a happy healthy little girl. She rolls over, says dada and hello, goes to daycare 3 days a week and is the most precious gift ive ever been given. I am still studying for my certificate and i should have it completed by june.
Tori
15 and pregnant and the father dont want to knowi was going out with a boy for a few months,we knew each other for years.....and when i fount out i was pregnant i was devasted i didnt know what to do. i told my closest friend and she said shell be there for me.i didnt tell my family till i was 4 months. when i finally plucked up the courage to tell the father of my baby,he went mad and said to me to get rid of it or hell never talk to me again....i was so upset thinking to myself i was going to be alone......then i told my mum and she was so dissapointed but she said she will do her best to help me and my baby....it took me a while to get used to it as i so wanted to do my gcses and get a job but i knew i wanted my baby to have the best...every time i went for a scan my heart would warm up knowing something i made was inside me and i needed to be strong.....then on the 14.3.10 at 11pm my darling daughter georgia was born and ive never been so happy...now im home schooled and its working fine......the father of my child still doesnt want to know but to me aslong as my daughter has me and my family shell be ok...i losted alot of friends but i gained a star i will have forever
charley-charlotte
hi, my name is lissa and i found out i was pregnant when i was 16. the father was a guy i knew for a long time. i was 1 month pregnant when i told him. the first thing he said was " what??" then he went on to say that it is partly his fault i am pregnant and he will definately be in his babys life. we stayed together. the next step was telling my parents. my mom was very upset because she was a teen mom she kicked me out for 1 week then she said " i know how it is, so i will help you" she was a teen mom aswell. she had me when she was 19. my dad was very dissapointed. his little girl was PREGNANT!! i cried for about a month, because i made my parents dissapointed after all they did for me. he just said we all make mistake, so if you think your old enough to have sex, your old enough to take are of the baby. he said hell help me though. 5 months later i found out i was having a boy. people at school were definately talking!! i never really cared what people said. then my due date came and passed. i actually had the baby 1 week passed my due date MARCH 27 2009. his name was XAVIER. my bubba, lol. i love my son so much. when he was 3 months his father told me he cant be with me anymore because he feels he doesnt feel the same way he did before. i cried for a whole week. the father of xavier is still coming by twice a week to see him. he is trying to help me finacially. i am now living in my own apartment. im doing fine. i am getting an education at a community college. i have my familys support. i always say i love the father of my son for giving me the best gift in the world,,, XAVIER.
lissa
Experience is a Hard Teacher
I got pregnant when I was 17 years old, I was so happy due to the fact that it was from my first love in high school. I had dreams of us being together forever, through thick or thin. But I was wrong! We broke up after our third child and after 10 years of being together. I struggled alot and had gotten evicted many times due to the fact that I didn't have a high school diploma. I was depressed all of the time, and I tried to commit suicide, because no one likes to see their child hungry, and I was just a kid myself or at least what was left of one. I was fortunate because my father caught me and called 911. After they pumped my stomach I was sent to the crazy house (NO REALLY). There I was counceled and they kept asking me why I was trying to do something so permanent for a situation so temporary. I told them over and over my reason,but they kept saying that it would get better. I am 30 years old, I have 5 kids and it is still hard for me. But I count on no one, I struggled through all of my 20's and I was in and out of abusive relationships starting with the one with my kids father. He is in prison and my kids are just fine. I am in college now typing this story. Because, I want other people now what I experienced in hopes that they will not make the same mistakes that I did. Never let anyone ruin your life. I mean if you are not ready to become a mother, never let anyone talk you into it. Because it is not fun being poor and uneducated. Its not fun watching your kids go to bed without eating or not having enough to eat, and its not fun when your kids want something and you are not able to get it. I am the only one that stuck around and struggled with my kids. I am the one they come to when they are happy and when they are not. I am a good mom but it was hard!
Vikki
single and aloneI am 19 and have just found out that I am pregnant. I am alone now because my boyfriend of 3 months has got back together with his ex who he also has a kid with but he doesnt want to know and has basically ignored me even though I have told him that I am pregnant and i think he will want me to have an abortion if he even acknowledges me and my baby. I am scared to tell my family because I am the responsible one and should not be doing this.
Vikki
Surpise at 16I fell pregnant in November of 2008. I wasn't late when i found out but my mother said she thought i was pregnant and to take a test. Mothers intuition she blamed it on. I took 4 tests and in astonishment i discovered i was indeed pregnant. I was 16 years old. (Just) I told my boyfriend who was quite calm about it and said 'it doesn't surprise me now lets tell your mum/" i told mum and she said ' lets take you to the dr then and get a blood test to make sure' 2 days later it was confirmed and i was approx 3 weeks pregnant giving me a due date of August 25 2009. By this point i was excited but i still had no education so i enrolled in TAFE to get a school certificate. My pregnancy progressed smoothly and by 7 months i looked as though i was carrying twins. I was huge. We tried to find out the sex of the baby but it had its legs crossed in the ultrasound so we were told we had to wait. My due date came and went and on August 29th 2009 i wasn't feeling myself. I kept getting cramps but they were very irregular coming every 2 hours. I dismissed them as labour pains until later that night when my boyfriend and brother went fishing. I stayed with mum and later had to call my boyfriend to get him to come home as i was quite scared and uncomfortable. I laboured all night and the pains only got intense around 5am (August 30th) I spent the whole night watching TV and walking around and timing contractions. At 5.30am we left to go to the hospital. The Dr told me i wasn't in labour and to go home and take panadol. I went home quite angry to be honest and tried choking down panadol until i said to mum, I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!' and after saying that my water broke all over the lounge room floor. My boyfriend whisked me up and put me in the car and mum rushed me back to hospital where they confirmed i was 6cm dialated and was progressing quite quickly. I was told to expect a baby within the next 24hrs. The next 5 hrs were a complete blur to me, the pain was intense but not unbearable. I pushed and pushed for almost an hour and after having an episiotomy (which didnt hurt) my little GIRL was born. She weighed 7.6lbs and 49cm long. She had blonde hair, blue eyes and a very loud scream! I looked up and both my mum and boyfriend were crying. 4 hours after giving birth i went home because the midwives were cruel to me i assume because of my age. Xanthie is 7 months old now and is a happy healthy little girl. She rolls over, says dada and hello, goes to daycare 3 days a week and is the most precious gift ive ever been given. I am still studying for my certificate and i should have it completed by june.
Tori
15 and pregnant and the father dont want to knowi was going out with a boy for a few months,we knew each other for years.....and when i fount out i was pregnant i was devasted i didnt know what to do. i told my closest friend and she said shell be there for me.i didnt tell my family till i was 4 months. when i finally plucked up the courage to tell the father of my baby,he went mad and said to me to get rid of it or hell never talk to me again....i was so upset thinking to myself i was going to be alone......then i told my mum and she was so dissapointed but she said she will do her best to help me and my baby....it took me a while to get used to it as i so wanted to do my gcses and get a job but i knew i wanted my baby to have the best...every time i went for a scan my heart would warm up knowing something i made was inside me and i needed to be strong.....then on the 14.3.10 at 11pm my darling daughter georgia was born and ive never been so happy...now im home schooled and its working fine......the father of my child still doesnt want to know but to me aslong as my daughter has me and my family shell be ok...i losted alot of friends but i gained a star i will have forever
charley-charlotte
Thursday, April 15, 2010
Sample Chapter
" I was Forced"
I'm Simone. I am 16 and a I have a horrible reputation. I smoke , I drink and I am a very disobedient child. At school really bad rumors have been spreading about me. No one really cared about me so they didnt really think about everything I did.
The only one that cared was Karen and she couldnt change me if she tried her hardest.Karen is one of my friends that basically follows the right path and does th right things. She acts like my parent. I love her but she's always bugging out on everything I do.
On april 5th 2005, me and Andrew, My boyfriend we were drinking, smoking and talking about us. He basically went out with me because the bad rumor that went around the school. Andrew kept asking me to do something I kept refusing. Andrew kept telling me until he had enough. He pulled me to the room and pushed me on the bed. He said we were going to do this in a serious voice so I just went along because I was scared. We did it and although it wasnt that bad I regreted every second of it. When I got home my parents kept bugging me about how I was gonna end up on the corners as a prostitute and selling drugs and I didnt listen to anyword that they said. That night my dad notice my conversation. He came in the room and asked me who i was talking to and ofcoursed I lied and said that I was talking to Karen and I was really talking to Keisha .My dad walked in on me with a belt in his hands. He said to me"so you went to a party yesterday huh? ohh and did you tell me or your mom?" I said "No" He told me to take off my shirt and turn to my back side.He hit me 6 times with the belt and when I got in the shower my skin was burning and I had many nasty welts on my back.I refused to show my back to anyone because if they knew some how it would get to my parents and once it got to my dad he would beat me again. The week after i had brought a pregnancy test. I used the pregnancy test and aftere waiting a while the test read" Positive". My eyes widened and I was scared to death. That night I had left a note on the door of my house the note said " I'm leaving , you guys dont do nothing for me, you guys dont care about me. I have no one that cares about me in this house. Bye.dont come looking for me because you wont find me."That night I went to Karen's house. She lives alone and didnt have a problem with me staying there.I told her everything that happend and she just listened.Karen was there for me. We went to the hospital the next day. We waited a long while to get in the office. When we got in the doctor's office The only thing I said was" ABORTION". I wanted an Abortion. The Doctor, Dr.Matthews took me outside the room. We had a very serious conversation.
Me: Yes?
Dr.Matthews: Are you sure?
Me: Doctor , I cant do this, Im not ready doctor. Im not ready to have a child.
Dr.Matthews: Simone you got pregnant. You did this. It was your deciscion.
Me: I know but Doctor please .....
Dr.Matthews:Okay Simone.
Me: Thank you Doctor.I will go now.
Dr.Matthews:Good bye
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I'm Simone. I am 16 and a I have a horrible reputation. I smoke , I drink and I am a very disobedient child. At school really bad rumors have been spreading about me. No one really cared about me so they didnt really think about everything I did.
The only one that cared was Karen and she couldnt change me if she tried her hardest.Karen is one of my friends that basically follows the right path and does th right things. She acts like my parent. I love her but she's always bugging out on everything I do.
On april 5th 2005, me and Andrew, My boyfriend we were drinking, smoking and talking about us. He basically went out with me because the bad rumor that went around the school. Andrew kept asking me to do something I kept refusing. Andrew kept telling me until he had enough. He pulled me to the room and pushed me on the bed. He said we were going to do this in a serious voice so I just went along because I was scared. We did it and although it wasnt that bad I regreted every second of it. When I got home my parents kept bugging me about how I was gonna end up on the corners as a prostitute and selling drugs and I didnt listen to anyword that they said. That night my dad notice my conversation. He came in the room and asked me who i was talking to and ofcoursed I lied and said that I was talking to Karen and I was really talking to Keisha .My dad walked in on me with a belt in his hands. He said to me"so you went to a party yesterday huh? ohh and did you tell me or your mom?" I said "No" He told me to take off my shirt and turn to my back side.He hit me 6 times with the belt and when I got in the shower my skin was burning and I had many nasty welts on my back.I refused to show my back to anyone because if they knew some how it would get to my parents and once it got to my dad he would beat me again. The week after i had brought a pregnancy test. I used the pregnancy test and aftere waiting a while the test read" Positive". My eyes widened and I was scared to death. That night I had left a note on the door of my house the note said " I'm leaving , you guys dont do nothing for me, you guys dont care about me. I have no one that cares about me in this house. Bye.dont come looking for me because you wont find me."That night I went to Karen's house. She lives alone and didnt have a problem with me staying there.I told her everything that happend and she just listened.Karen was there for me. We went to the hospital the next day. We waited a long while to get in the office. When we got in the doctor's office The only thing I said was" ABORTION". I wanted an Abortion. The Doctor, Dr.Matthews took me outside the room. We had a very serious conversation.
Me: Yes?
Dr.Matthews: Are you sure?
Me: Doctor , I cant do this, Im not ready doctor. Im not ready to have a child.
Dr.Matthews: Simone you got pregnant. You did this. It was your deciscion.
Me: I know but Doctor please .....
Dr.Matthews:Okay Simone.
Me: Thank you Doctor.I will go now.
Dr.Matthews:Good bye
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Outline
~*~Introduction~*~
~*~Climax ~*~
~*~Resolution~*~
Title: My Mistake
Setting: The Bronx-2005
Author:Yorie Taylor(OF COURSE)
Characters:
*Simone(Main Character)
*Karen(Simone's friend)
*Laura(Simone's Mom)
*Denis(Simone's Dad)
*Andrew(Simone's BoyFriend)
*Dr.Matthews(Simone's doctor)
*Keisha(Simone's friend that encouraged her to smoke)
*_____(Simone's baby boy)
* ____(Simone's therapist)
Trichomoiasis:a sexually transmitted disease typically asymptomatic in men and resulting in vaginitis with a copious, frothy discharge and itching in women, caused by a trichomonad Trichomonas vaginalis.
- Simone is a bad child who drinks and smokes and gets in alot of trouble.
- She has a bad rep. and no one barely believes in her.
- Her friend Karen is the only one who believes in her and knoes she can do better with her life.
- She lives in the bronx.
- The year is 2005
- Simone goes to a party and this boy named Andrew forced her to do something she doesnt want to do
- Simone gets pregnant and decides to run away because she doesnt want her parents to know she got pregnant.
- Simone's boyfriend Andrew dies
- Simone Injects herself with drugs
- Simone has a therapist and falls in love.
~*~Climax ~*~
- Simone askes her doctor for an ABORTION
- Karen hears Simone talking to the doctor about this decision and feels that Simone is going to regret this Abortion if she goes along with it.
- Karen and Simone have an argument about this and Karen stops believing in her.
- The baby that simone killed during the ABORTION talks to her in her sleep and sends her messages through all her dreams saying" Mommy....why ?
- Simone gets caught up trying to kill herself at the same time she hears her dead baby telling her" mommy dont do this I was only a mistake" and her baby saying "mommy im in a better place now"
- Simone; out of the blue gets pregnant and once she gives birth the baby she has looks just like the baby Simone killed with the ABORTION that has been visiting all of her dreams making her go crazy.
- It turns out that Dr.Matthews put the wrong needle into Simone instead of the Abortion needle and Simone getsreally sick and the baby still dies.
- Simone turns out to have a STD-(Trichomoniasis)-
- Simone goes to rehab and her family finds her and she runs away from them and her father tries to kill her.
- Simone runs into a dark labyrnith inside of a valley and she goes crazy and sees many men surrounding her looking as if they're ready to rape her.
- Simone wakes up and notices it was a nightmare.
~*~Resolution~*~
- Simone'sbaby that she before ends up killing her.
- After the baby kills her the baby's body parts start fading away and the baby dies too.
- Simone's parents look for Simone and they just think she needs time to think so they just leave it alone.
- Karen kills Simone's dad while watching him beat Simone's mom and then her mom just for not caring.
- Karen moves away and starts to follow off of Simone's bad habbits
Title: My Mistake
Setting: The Bronx-2005
Author:Yorie Taylor(OF COURSE)
Characters:
*Simone(Main Character)
*Karen(Simone's friend)
*Laura(Simone's Mom)
*Denis(Simone's Dad)
*Andrew(Simone's BoyFriend)
*Dr.Matthews(Simone's doctor)
*Keisha(Simone's friend that encouraged her to smoke)
*_____(Simone's baby boy)
* ____(Simone's therapist)
Trichomoiasis:a sexually transmitted disease typically asymptomatic in men and resulting in vaginitis with a copious, frothy discharge and itching in women, caused by a trichomonad Trichomonas vaginalis.
Wednesday, April 14, 2010
Novel Pitch
tThis novel " My mistake" is a book for teenagers . This book is about a girl named Simone. Simone is 16 and she is crazy. She smokes, She drinks and she hangs out with the wrong group of people. One day she went to a party and was smoking and drinking with this guy named Andrew. Sooner or later Andrew forced her to do something that she didnt want to do.1 week later Simone took a pregnancy test. The pregnancy test said" Positive " Simone was afraid of her parents finding out so as soon as they arrived home the only thing in the house was a letter on the fridge.The letter wrote," Dear mom and dad, I am leaving this house. I dont appreciate the way I am being treated. Do not come look for me ......Bye guys :(" That night her mom and dad cried until sleep.Sooner or later they didnt care or think of it anymore....Simone had went to her friend's house. She stayed there for a while. Her and her friend went to the hospital one day. When Simone's doctor came their was a sudden silence. Simone soon said one word, " ABORTION?" the doctor took Simone out of the room and had a talk.
Doctor: Are you sure Simone?
Simone: Yes .....I am tired of being pregnant; I am not liking the way this feels, being pregnant hurts Doctor"
Doctor: This is what you did Simone! YOU WERE THE ONE THAT GOT PREGNANT
Simone you need to think right
Simone: DOCTOR I WANT THE ABORTION okay? I WANT IT!!
Doctor: Okay Simone.....Have a nice day
Simone: Bye doctor
This novel will enterain many people. It will teach them what not to do and how many mistakes that they can get caught up any situation. If any body enjoys action and drama they would love this Novel. I hope that they will enjoy this book.
Doctor: Are you sure Simone?
Simone: Yes .....I am tired of being pregnant; I am not liking the way this feels, being pregnant hurts Doctor"
Doctor: This is what you did Simone! YOU WERE THE ONE THAT GOT PREGNANT
Simone you need to think right
Simone: DOCTOR I WANT THE ABORTION okay? I WANT IT!!
Doctor: Okay Simone.....Have a nice day
Simone: Bye doctor
This novel will enterain many people. It will teach them what not to do and how many mistakes that they can get caught up any situation. If any body enjoys action and drama they would love this Novel. I hope that they will enjoy this book.
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