Fix The Mistake.
{1} Your cousin is always SULLEN ; It seems like he nevers smiles at all.
{2}This ice cream is just what I need toQUENCH my desire of something sweet.
{3}I put a MAGNETIC strip on the back of my picture so my grandma can easily put it on her refridgerator.
{4}Trent ASPIRES to be the best singer in the school; unfortunatley, no matter how many lessons he takes, he still sounds like a croaking frog everytime he sings.
{5}Mary couldn't come tonight because she had URGENT buisness to attend to;her mother suddenly fell sick and had to be rushed to the hospital.
{6}The rabbit became WARY and alert when it heard the baying of distance dogs.
{7}Luis is a video game ADDICT; Ms.Chen had to take away his phone because he couldn't stop playing letris in class.
{8}The lyrics to this song is awful,but the CHORUS gets stuck in my leg.
{9}When the robot army was finally defeated , the villagers had a feast that was filled with
songs,jokes and a feeling of great MIRTH.
{10}Hannah tried to be SUBTLE so that Kyle wouldn't be embarassed;He didn't get the hint , though, so she finally blurted out, " DUDE ,YOU GOT DRAGON BREATH!"
{11}If the workers aren't careful around the TOXIC waste of from nuclear power plant, it could make them extremely sick.
{12}I'm not sure that you understand the GRAVITY of the situation: If James doesn't get to school rigth now he is going to fail english.
{13}Dionne is so good at card tricks; she can CONJURE a pack of cards out of thin air.'
{14}Andres is such a FIREBRAND; in math class she had everyone hooting like owls everytime Mr.Stimpers used the word"angle".
{15}The thief planned to rob a bank, but first he needed to AQUIRE a getaway car.
Pick The Winner
~1~ Urgent
~2~I was Ugent when my friend called to tell me her grandfather died.
~3~Quenched
~4~I Quenched my desire of something cold by turning up the airconditioner in my room.
~5~Firebrand
~6~Jahki was knowned as the Firebrand of the class.
~7~Toxic
~8~My doctor tried to give me Toxic medicine.I was not gonna swallow that huge pill.
~9~Wary
~10~I became very wary of dogs ever since I got bit by a huge pit bull.
Draw The Relationship
Words Synonym Antonym
1.Desire Aspire N/A
2.Obvious N/A Subtle
3.Critical N/A N/A
4.Wary Trusting N/A
5.Quench Satisfy N/A
6.Aquire N/A Lose
7.Gravity Importance N/A
8.Chorus Choir N/A
9.Toxic N/A Harmless
10.Mirth Happiness Sullen
11.Firebrand troublemaker N/A
Understanding What You Read
1.{B}
2.{C}
3.{C}
4.{A}
5.{B}
Thinking Creativley
1.Question:If you could aquire a new talent what would it be?
Answer:Playing the Harp
2.Question:When might it be good for a firebrand?
Answer:A firebrand might be good when the whole room is grim.
3.Question:What gives you mirth?
Answer:Television
4.Question: What would you put in a soup called "The Toxic Stew"
Answer: Poison chemicals
5.Question:What famous person do you aspire to be like?
Answer: Megan Fox
Monday, May 17, 2010
Thursday, May 13, 2010
Research
What is abortion?
Researched info.
Dawn,Stacey M.January 30,2010. What is abortion?
http://contraception.about.com/od/contraceptionfailure/a/aboutabortion.htm
What do women get abortions?
Researched info.
Dawn,Stacey M. January 30,2010. Reasons why women get abortions.
http://contraception.about.com/od/contraceptionfailure/a/aboutabortion.htm/
Why is abortion legal?
Researched Info.
Chisholm,Ken 7/16/09 Nine Reasons Why Abortions are Legal
http://www.livestrong.com/article/13934-nine-reasons-why-abortions-are-legal/
What is Trichomoniasis?
Resarched info.
N/A
Trichomoniasis is a common sexually transmitted disease (STD) that affects both women and men, although symptoms are more common in women.
http://www.cdc.gov/std/trichomonas/STDFact-Trichomoniasis.htm
Researched info.
Dawn,Stacey M.January 30,2010. What is abortion?
http://contraception.about.com/od/contraceptionfailure/a/aboutabortion.htm
What do women get abortions?
Researched info.
Dawn,Stacey M. January 30,2010. Reasons why women get abortions.
http://contraception.about.com/od/contraceptionfailure/a/aboutabortion.htm/
Why is abortion legal?
Researched Info.
Chisholm,Ken 7/16/09 Nine Reasons Why Abortions are Legal
http://www.livestrong.com/article/13934-nine-reasons-why-abortions-are-legal/
What is Trichomoniasis?
Resarched info.
N/A
Trichomoniasis is a common sexually transmitted disease (STD) that affects both women and men, although symptoms are more common in women.
http://www.cdc.gov/std/trichomonas/STDFact-Trichomoniasis.htm
Tuesday, May 11, 2010
Simone's Life Line
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~She Was Raped~
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~So was she~
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~She used drugs~
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~She should've said no.....=`[~
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~She got an abortion~
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~This was the result~
Poor Simone I wish she could notice
~She Was Raped~
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~So was she~
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~She used drugs~
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~She should've said no.....=`[~
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~She got an abortion~
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~This was the result~
Poor Simone I wish she could notice
Sample Chapter 3
" Panic Attack"
My other therapist called me and asked me, "Simone, Do you have an S.T.D ?". I was silent and started to cry. I answered Why? He told me that he just wanted to know because my files said that I had an S.T.D. I said yes.She came to my house and told me that I had to go into a crazy home. She said that it was the only thing that would help me get over my thoughts. I didn't argue because I didn't want to get into deep Sh**. I went into the crazy home and a bunch of mentally and physically challenged people were staring at me. I was scared out of my mind. They put me in a cushoned room by myself and put me in a stray jacket. I Stood in a corner and started to go crazy. All I saw was bloody words and pictures popping at me of my baby.
My other therapist called me and asked me, "Simone, Do you have an S.T.D ?". I was silent and started to cry. I answered Why? He told me that he just wanted to know because my files said that I had an S.T.D. I said yes.She came to my house and told me that I had to go into a crazy home. She said that it was the only thing that would help me get over my thoughts. I didn't argue because I didn't want to get into deep Sh**. I went into the crazy home and a bunch of mentally and physically challenged people were staring at me. I was scared out of my mind. They put me in a cushoned room by myself and put me in a stray jacket. I Stood in a corner and started to go crazy. All I saw was bloody words and pictures popping at me of my baby.
Character Biography
Character Biography
Main Character: Simone
Simone has a lot of problems in her life. She is beat by both of her parents and was once raped by her dad. She does all these things to get her parent’s attention but they never really change. Simone has had 5 foster families and they all left her for reasonable reasons such as they were alcoholics, drug addicts, or abusive. Simone has also run away 3 times. Simone is very anxious.She has a horrible life. At age 4 she almost lost her life from cancer, panic attack, stroke and heart attack. She has many things wrong with her life. She dropped out of school at age 10 because of dyslexia and ADHD. At age 12 Simone was known as a quickie. She was upset that this rumor was going around. She had a boyfriend at age 14 and the only reason he went around was because of that rumor. Simone started hanging out with Keisha. Keisha forced Simone to smoke weed and drink liquor and take drugs. At this time Simone didn’t have any sort of family and was living at a crack home. Simone was 15 at this time and living at a crack home was scary to her. She went to jail once and stayed doing the same things such as, smoking weed, drinking liquor and taking drugs. Simone wanted to stop these stupid habits but to her they were to her, too addictive.Simone is very crazy and problematic. Karen Simone’s friend tries to get Simone to stop but she couldn’t do it if she tried too hard.
Main Character: Simone
Simone has a lot of problems in her life. She is beat by both of her parents and was once raped by her dad. She does all these things to get her parent’s attention but they never really change. Simone has had 5 foster families and they all left her for reasonable reasons such as they were alcoholics, drug addicts, or abusive. Simone has also run away 3 times. Simone is very anxious.She has a horrible life. At age 4 she almost lost her life from cancer, panic attack, stroke and heart attack. She has many things wrong with her life. She dropped out of school at age 10 because of dyslexia and ADHD. At age 12 Simone was known as a quickie. She was upset that this rumor was going around. She had a boyfriend at age 14 and the only reason he went around was because of that rumor. Simone started hanging out with Keisha. Keisha forced Simone to smoke weed and drink liquor and take drugs. At this time Simone didn’t have any sort of family and was living at a crack home. Simone was 15 at this time and living at a crack home was scary to her. She went to jail once and stayed doing the same things such as, smoking weed, drinking liquor and taking drugs. Simone wanted to stop these stupid habits but to her they were to her, too addictive.Simone is very crazy and problematic. Karen Simone’s friend tries to get Simone to stop but she couldn’t do it if she tried too hard.
Tuesday, May 4, 2010
Fix The Mistake
1.
1.
- Incorrect Sentence: I lurched forward in my seat as the truck came to a robust hault.
- Correct Sentence: I lurched forward in my seat as the truck came to an abrupt hault.
- Incorrect Sentence: Without my glasses, I found it tough to abate what the teacher had written up on the black board.
- Correct Answer: Without my glasses, I found it tough to perceive what the teacher had written up on the black board.
Wednesday, April 28, 2010
Sample Chapter 2
" Mommy Why? "
Today I couldn't take the way this baby, My baby? was getting to my head. I went to a therapist and they told me to write everything the baby was saying and give it to him tommorow.
He handed me a note pad and a pencil to use and told me good day. That night when I got home, Karen's house, I took a shower and as soon as I got out I noticed that I was bleeding. "Why is this? Why am I bleeding?" I cried out. I went into the room Karen let me sleep in and on the wall was words written in red letters, Mommy Why?. I smelt the words and whiped some on my fingers, and yes, it was blood on the wall. I ran to get Karen and as soon as we returned to the room the letters were gone.
I took the note pad went into a corner and started writing. I wrote on the aper everything the baby was saying to me. When I went to the therapist the next day I gave him my paper and he was really suprised. I was the only patient of his that has/had this specific problem. I did not only write about what the baby was saying to me, I wrote about how I tried to kill myself and what happend that same night. He told me that he could not help me with this problem. He told me that he was going to send me to rehab and I begged him not to send me there. He told me nothing would happend and that they would put me in a nice quiet dorm/room and I have nothing to worry about. I believed him and went along with it. That night he took me there and something happend. He took me to his house. He asked me to do the same thing and I told him that I wouldnt because of what happend to andrew and he begged me. I did it. It was way better. My baby got to me again and said to me " What about Daddy mommy and I felt like Ohh Sh**. I loved my therapist. I made out with him for a while and he told me I was too young. I told him no and that I loved him too much and that age is just another number. He did'nt send me to rehab and instead of that he helped me by treating me to good help :) .Until he found me one night trying to commit suicide and he helped me and I told him that she's back. He put her in rehab the next night and that night someone sneaked into her dorm and almost raped her. She was so scared. She called he "lover" /therapist and he didn't believe her. The people in the rehab center put her in a stray jacket and in a cushoned room. Simone was so scared. That night Simone had a panic attack and they had to put numb needle in her nd cuff her up and put her to sleep. Back at home the therapist was looking at Simone's file and find out that she had an STD..........................
Today I couldn't take the way this baby, My baby? was getting to my head. I went to a therapist and they told me to write everything the baby was saying and give it to him tommorow.
He handed me a note pad and a pencil to use and told me good day. That night when I got home, Karen's house, I took a shower and as soon as I got out I noticed that I was bleeding. "Why is this? Why am I bleeding?" I cried out. I went into the room Karen let me sleep in and on the wall was words written in red letters, Mommy Why?. I smelt the words and whiped some on my fingers, and yes, it was blood on the wall. I ran to get Karen and as soon as we returned to the room the letters were gone.
I took the note pad went into a corner and started writing. I wrote on the aper everything the baby was saying to me. When I went to the therapist the next day I gave him my paper and he was really suprised. I was the only patient of his that has/had this specific problem. I did not only write about what the baby was saying to me, I wrote about how I tried to kill myself and what happend that same night. He told me that he could not help me with this problem. He told me that he was going to send me to rehab and I begged him not to send me there. He told me nothing would happend and that they would put me in a nice quiet dorm/room and I have nothing to worry about. I believed him and went along with it. That night he took me there and something happend. He took me to his house. He asked me to do the same thing and I told him that I wouldnt because of what happend to andrew and he begged me. I did it. It was way better. My baby got to me again and said to me " What about Daddy mommy and I felt like Ohh Sh**. I loved my therapist. I made out with him for a while and he told me I was too young. I told him no and that I loved him too much and that age is just another number. He did'nt send me to rehab and instead of that he helped me by treating me to good help :) .Until he found me one night trying to commit suicide and he helped me and I told him that she's back. He put her in rehab the next night and that night someone sneaked into her dorm and almost raped her. She was so scared. She called he "lover" /therapist and he didn't believe her. The people in the rehab center put her in a stray jacket and in a cushoned room. Simone was so scared. That night Simone had a panic attack and they had to put numb needle in her nd cuff her up and put her to sleep. Back at home the therapist was looking at Simone's file and find out that she had an STD..........................
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