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                                                                 " I was Forced"
I'm Simone. I am 16 and a I have a horrible reputation. I smoke , I drink and I am a very disobedient child. At school really bad rumors have been spreading about me. No one really cared about me so they didnt really think about everything I  did.
The only one that cared was Karen and she couldnt change me if she tried her hardest.Karen is one of my friends that basically follows the right path and does th right things. She acts like my parent. I love her but she's always bugging out on everything I do.
 On april 5th 2005, me and Andrew, My boyfriend we were drinking, smoking and talking about us. He basically  went out with me because the bad rumor that went around the school. Andrew kept asking me to do something I kept refusing. Andrew kept telling me until he had enough. He pulled me to the room and pushed me on the bed. He said we were going to do this in a serious voice so I just went along because I was scared. We did it and although it wasnt that bad I regreted every second of it. When I got home my parents kept bugging me about how I was gonna end up on the corners as a prostitute and selling drugs and I didnt listen to anyword that they said. That night my dad notice  my conversation. He came in the room and asked me who i was talking to and ofcoursed I lied and said that I was talking to Karen and I was really talking to Keisha .My dad walked in on me with a belt in his hands. He said to me"so you went to a party yesterday huh? ohh and did you tell me or your mom?" I said "No" He told me to take off my shirt and turn to my back side.He hit me 6 times with the belt and when I got in the shower my skin was burning and I had many nasty welts on my back.I refused to show my back to anyone because if they knew some how it would get to my parents and once it got to my dad he would beat me again. The week after i had brought a pregnancy  test. I used the pregnancy test and aftere waiting a while the test read" Positive". My eyes widened and  I was scared to death. That night I had left a note on the door of my house the note said " I'm leaving , you guys dont do nothing for me, you guys dont care about me. I have no one that cares about me in this house. Bye.dont come looking for me because you wont find me."That night I went to Karen's house. She lives alone and didnt have a problem with me staying there.I told her everything that happend and she just listened.Karen was there for me. We went to the hospital the next day. We waited a long while to get in the office. When we got in the doctor's office The only thing I said was" ABORTION". I wanted an Abortion. The Doctor, Dr.Matthews took me outside the room. We had a very serious conversation.
Me: Yes?
Dr.Matthews: Are you sure?
Me: Doctor , I cant do this, Im not ready doctor. Im not ready to have a child.
Dr.Matthews: Simone you got pregnant. You did this. It was your deciscion.
Me: I know but Doctor please .....
Dr.Matthews:Okay Simone.
Me: Thank you Doctor.I will go now.
Dr.Matthews:Good bye

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Outline

     ~*~Introduction~*~

• Simone is a bad child who drinks and smokes and gets in alot of trouble.
• She has a bad rep. and no one barely believes in her.
• Her friend  Karen is the only one who believes in her and knoes she can do better with her life.
• She lives in the bronx.
• The year is 2005

         ~*~Rising Action~*~

• Simone goes to a party and this boy named Andrew forced her to do something she doesnt want to do
• Simone gets pregnant and decides to run away because she doesnt want her parents to know she got pregnant.
• Simone's boyfriend Andrew dies
• Simone Injects herself with drugs
• Simone has a therapist and falls in love.

      ~*~Climax ~*~

• Simone askes her doctor for an ABORTION
• Karen hears Simone talking to the doctor about this decision and feels that Simone is going to regret this Abortion if she goes along with it.
• Karen and Simone have an argument about this and Karen stops believing in her.
• The baby that simone killed during the ABORTION talks to her in her sleep and sends her messages through all her dreams saying" Mommy....why ?
• Simone gets caught up trying to kill herself at the same time she hears her dead baby telling her" mommy dont do this I was only a mistake" and her baby saying "mommy im in a better place now"
• Simone; out of the blue gets pregnant and once she gives birth the baby she has looks just like the baby Simone killed with the ABORTION that has been visiting all of her dreams making her go crazy.
• It turns out that Dr.Matthews put the wrong needle into Simone instead of the Abortion needle and Simone getsreally sick and the baby still dies.
• Simone turns out to have a STD-(Trichomoniasis)-

       ~*~Falling Action~*~

• Simone goes to rehab and  her family finds her and she runs away from them and her father tries to kill her.
• Simone runs into a dark labyrnith inside of a valley and she goes crazy and sees many men surrounding her looking as if they're ready to rape her.
• Simone wakes up and notices it was a nightmare.

       ~*~Resolution~*~

• Simone'sbaby that she before ends up killing her.
•  After the baby kills her the baby's body parts start fading away and the baby dies too.
• Simone's parents look for Simone and they just think she needs time to think so they just leave it alone.
• Karen kills Simone's dad while watching him beat Simone's mom and then her mom just for not caring.
• Karen moves away and starts to follow off of Simone's bad habbits

Title: My Mistake
Setting: The Bronx-2005
Author:Yorie Taylor(OF COURSE)
Characters:
*Simone(Main Character)
*Karen(Simone's friend)
*Laura(Simone's Mom)
*Denis(Simone's Dad)
*Andrew(Simone's BoyFriend)
*Dr.Matthews(Simone's doctor)
*Keisha(Simone's friend that encouraged her to smoke)
*_____(Simone's baby boy)
* ____(Simone's therapist)

Trichomoiasis:a sexually transmitted disease typically asymptomatic in men and resulting in vaginitis with a copious, frothy discharge and itching in women, caused by a trichomonad Trichomonas vaginalis.

Novel Pitch

tThis novel " My mistake" is a book for teenagers . This book is about a girl named Simone. Simone is 16 and she is crazy. She smokes, She drinks and she hangs out with the wrong group of people. One day she went to a party and was smoking and drinking with this guy named Andrew. Sooner or later Andrew forced her to do something that she didnt want to do.1 week later Simone took a pregnancy test. The pregnancy test said" Positive " Simone was afraid of her parents finding out so as soon as they arrived home the only thing in the house was a letter on the fridge.The letter wrote," Dear mom and dad, I am leaving this house. I dont appreciate the way I am being treated. Do not come look for me ......Bye guys :(" That night her mom and dad cried until sleep.Sooner or later they didnt care or think of it anymore....Simone had went to her friend's house. She stayed there for a while. Her and her friend went to the hospital one day. When Simone's doctor came their was a sudden silence. Simone soon said one word, " ABORTION?" the doctor took Simone out of the room and had  a talk.
Doctor: Are you sure Simone?
Simone: Yes .....I am tired of being pregnant; I am not liking the way this feels, being pregnant hurts Doctor"
Doctor: This is what you did Simone! YOU WERE THE ONE THAT GOT PREGNANT
Simone you need to think right
Simone: DOCTOR I WANT THE ABORTION okay? I WANT IT!!
Doctor: Okay Simone.....Have a nice day
Simone: Bye doctor

This novel will enterain many people. It will teach them what not to do and how many mistakes that they can get caught up any  situation. If any body enjoys action and drama they would love this Novel. I hope that they will enjoy this book. 

A subject is a Noun;A Person,Place or thing that is included inside of a sentence.
A predicate is a Verb;Action that is included inside of a sentence.

Example1: Brittany played baseball with her 3 brothers.
Subject: Brittany
Predicate:Played

Example2: David watched a movie with his mother.
Subject: David
Predicate:Watched


Example3: Yolanda walked with her kids to school.
Subject: Yolanda
Predicate: walked

Example4: Jacob jumped in joy.
Subject: Jacob
Predicate: Jumped


Example5: Selena sat  in class all day
Subject: Selena
Predicate: Sat


Example6:Jonathan looked around the class.
Subject: Jonathan
Predicate: Looked


Example7: Maria danced at the school play.
Subject: Maria
Predicate: Danced


Example8: Dylan slept in class yesterday.
Subject: Dylan
Predicate: Slept

Example9: Thalia skipped to school .
Subject: Thalia
Predicate: Skipped

Example10: Brian left  his house.
Subject: Brian
Predicate: Left

Class Work:Expository Lesson # 3

Expository Lesson#3:how do we cite scources?




Question1:Is Extraterrestrial life possible?
Answer:Many people believe that Extraterrestial life is possible but according to the research it is very rare
Rescourse:    http://www.webpan.com/ 

Question2: What do aliens eat
Answer:People/Human Beings
Rescource: http://www.wikianswers.com/

Question3: How do aliens make  babies?
Answer:They have babie by letting them fall out of the lumps on the mommy's head.After done you have to rub the mommy's head.
Rescourse: http://www.wikianswers.com/

class Work

Topic:Hispanic/Latino American Culture and History
Audience:

Question#1:Who was the best Latino American Soccer Players?
Answer:Perola Negra and O'Rei
 Source: http://www.wikianswers.com/

Question#2:What is the biggest Latin Country/area of land?
Answer:Mexico
Source: http://www.wikianswers.com/

Question#3:Who was the best Latin women singer?
Answer:Selena
http://www.infoplease.com/

Orangutans-Writers Response(non-fiction lesson 1)

(3) I think the MAIN reason Orangutans are threatened with extinction is because they are Valuable and rare in  many places.Most of the time public zoos take in animals that are rare and extinct.I say this because zoos usually contain animals you wouldn't be able to find in the wild life,jungles or forests.Orangutans now in the day are very rare and are definently extinct.Orangutans have many reasons for being threatened with extinction.

(4)I think the purpose of Galdikas in the picture with the 2 baby Orangutans served many points in the article.1 point is to show how much he cares about Orangutans.Another point is to show that he is brave enough to go into a forest and keep Orangutans free from public places such as Zoos.

(5)  Every now and then my cat,my very,very,very annoying cat purrs for water.It really annoys me but it catches my sister's attention.Sometimes I think she is just heating because she needs a boy-friend.I hate to hear her purr because it sounds like long fingernails scratching down a black board.screeeecchhh!!!! I hate it!!This illustrates to me that my cat really likes to annoy me and hates my guts.Well guess what kitty I hate you to so blahh!!!

Do you like #5 on this?
It is really amusing isn't it?