Thursday, April 15, 2010

Outline

     ~*~Introduction~*~

  • Simone is a bad child who drinks and smokes and gets in alot of trouble.
  • She has a bad rep. and no one barely believes in her.
  • Her friend  Karen is the only one who believes in her and knoes she can do better with her life.
  • She lives in the bronx.
  • The year is 2005
         ~*~Rising Action~*~
  • Simone goes to a party and this boy named Andrew forced her to do something she doesnt want to do
  • Simone gets pregnant and decides to run away because she doesnt want her parents to know she got pregnant.
  • Simone's boyfriend Andrew dies
  • Simone Injects herself with drugs
  • Simone has a therapist and falls in love.


      ~*~Climax ~*~

  • Simone askes her doctor for an ABORTION
  • Karen hears Simone talking to the doctor about this decision and feels that Simone is going to regret this Abortion if she goes along with it.
  • Karen and Simone have an argument about this and Karen stops believing in her.
  • The baby that simone killed during the ABORTION talks to her in her sleep and sends her messages through all her dreams saying" Mommy....why ?
  • Simone gets caught up trying to kill herself at the same time she hears her dead baby telling her" mommy dont do this I was only a mistake" and her baby saying "mommy im in a better place now"
  • Simone; out of the blue gets pregnant and once she gives birth the baby she has looks just like the baby Simone killed with the ABORTION that has been visiting all of her dreams making her go crazy.
  • It turns out that Dr.Matthews put the wrong needle into Simone instead of the Abortion needle and Simone getsreally sick and the baby still dies.
  • Simone turns out to have a STD-(Trichomoniasis)-
       ~*~Falling Action~*~
  • Simone goes to rehab and  her family finds her and she runs away from them and her father tries to kill her.
  • Simone runs into a dark labyrnith inside of a valley and she goes crazy and sees many men surrounding her looking as if they're ready to rape her.
  • Simone wakes up and notices it was a nightmare.


       ~*~Resolution~*~
  • Simone'sbaby that she before ends up killing her.
  •  After the baby kills her the baby's body parts start fading away and the baby dies too.
  • Simone's parents look for Simone and they just think she needs time to think so they just leave it alone.
  • Karen kills Simone's dad while watching him beat Simone's mom and then her mom just for not caring.
  • Karen moves away and starts to follow off of Simone's bad habbits



Title: My Mistake
Setting: The Bronx-2005
Author:Yorie Taylor(OF COURSE)
Characters:
*Simone(Main Character)
*Karen(Simone's friend)
*Laura(Simone's Mom)
*Denis(Simone's Dad)
*Andrew(Simone's BoyFriend)
*Dr.Matthews(Simone's doctor)
*Keisha(Simone's friend that encouraged her to smoke)
*_____(Simone's baby boy)
* ____(Simone's therapist)

Trichomoiasis:a sexually transmitted disease typically asymptomatic in men and resulting in vaginitis with a copious, frothy discharge and itching in women, caused by a trichomonad Trichomonas vaginalis.

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